Save the dugongs!

well when he is trying to push the cart can his face really turn a shade of violet in the burning heat? wouldnt it turn a sweltering red instead? If ...

First I'll be critical and just revising it for detail: -Watch your punctuation on line 6: no apostrophe on others. I liked how you transitioned from the topic of power ...

That was really clever. You may have a star sir.

Two reasons why i like it. 1) It is not too long and easy to read. 2) It relates to something that many writers can understand and empathise with. Some ...

Rain fell woefully, the sound of it's relentless dance filled the hollow lane. Only Aaron's own splashing footsteps on the muddy drive could be heard over the chatter. The world ...